This is an excerpt from longer piece, which is a novel-in-progress.
Dreams are an upside-down, a bebop jazz arrangement, a variation on a melody, sometimes absurd, sometimes wisdom's fruit.
But in that moment, that limbo in-between, we a torn, dual citizens, double agents, not wholly either here nor there.
As I read the words of William Wordsworth, I remembered my dream. Without the words there before me, I might have not recalled.
There was a dream.
For another, it might have been nothing, of little consequence or value. But to me, it was the zenith from which I could see afar.
On a battlefield I stood. Around me chaos, but a chaos that was scripted. Wild, random, rapid. Death at every turn. Terror with no escape. But as I turned to the rhythm of the dance, I was in sync, nothing to fear. A sword like this, a shield thus. Now turn. Now jump. When you are one with the confusion, there is no chaos. There is choreography. There is a conductor holding a baton.
I shouted my revenge: “Be gone! Perish! Taste your defeat!”
But in my mind, I counted, “Two, three, four. And two, three four.” I kept in step, dodging swords, weaving between the dangers.
And then, at a level still deeper, I spoke to myself in a hushed and calming tone. “This is a dream. You are dreaming. You may feel the pain, but there is none. You are dreaming. Enjoy.”
And with that, the battle slowed. Arms were severed. Blood still flew. Thrust and slice. Swords crossed and crashed. Slowly. Slower. Then stop.
“Another game of statues,” I thought. “Soldiers frozen. Horses stopped. Chariots stilled.”
But the sound continued. A crashing, crunching, loud and vile commotion. Distant, a conch sounded. A blare, long and clear, clean and triumphant.
A man spoke. His voice could be heard only as the sound of the conch diminished and then there was no other sound but his words. To me they spoke.
“Behold the battle,” he said. “Behold.”
I looked around. Like a frieze surrounding or tapestry full, I saw terror on the face of every soldiers. I saw brothers fighting brothers, allies and enemies, both. I saw humanity dance its own destruction.
“Your tears are for those beyond tears,” he said.
“Are your words those of true wisdom?” he asked.
I did not answer. I only looked into his too familiar face.
“Do the wise grieve for those who live? They do not grieve for those who die.”
“I do recognize this man,” I thought, “this man who speaks to me alone in the midst of this great battle.”
“Who?” I said aloud.
“You have never been born,” he said
“Who?” I asked again.
“The Spirit,” he said. “The Spirit wanders from childhood through the fields of youth, through adulthood and old age. And so beyond. To a new body, a new life, again and again.”
He paused as if waiting for me to speak. I said nothing.
“So you see,” he said, “you were never born and you shall never die. Of this,” he said, “the wise sage has no doubt.”
Was I a wise sage? Did I have doubts?
“Enjoyment, pain, heat and cold,” he waved his arm to take in the entire battlefield, “they come and go. Rise above them all. You are a strong soul, worthy of Eternity.”
I looked deeply into his eyes. And then I closed my own. I tried to understand. Still, and especially now with my eyes so tight, I knew it all to be a dream. An illusion of my own design, I said.
I heard his voice, now closer, a whisper in my ear. “Take off your cloak. Put on another. As simple as that, the Spirit moves from old body to new. Awake,” he said. “Awaken.”
To the sound of the conch, I opened my eyes. “It was a dream,” I told myself, looking around the room, my own home, my study. “A dream. But not of my own making.”
I found my finger upon the book, my place marked, among the poet’s words.
They were both invited by email and in person. i will remind them again when I see them.
Have Pat (Sherridan/Anslow) and Chris (Greaves) been invited?
A profoundly courageous plunge into the battle, Richard. Very Aquarian and a bit Scorpionic. Really quite wonderful, as are your other works.
Yes those dots are very subtle. It took me a while to work them out. And the 'follow' thing sometimes produces email notice of a post but sometimes I have found posts on the site when no email has come.
I discovered this week that by clicking on a member's icon one can go directly to their posts.
But that doesn't lead to interesting comments they might also have made.
I suppose a lot of people are just busy and we are lucky to have time to browse and enjoy.
This site has been such an inspiration to me. I am inspired to take my writing more seriously than I had been.
And I miss some of the voices which have appeared and then fallen silent for some time.
It is early days yet, no doubt lots of amazing posts are yet to come.
The chance encounter with Benoit mentioned above occurred in August in Cabella, some time between the two puja, probably a day or two before the Shri Ganesha Puja. I had never met Benoit before, but we started talking about writing and Sahaj writing and the desire to know what other writers are up to and perhaps the need for mutual support and encouragement.
So if people are shy about posting their writing, we need to present this site as a safe place, a place for support, love and growth, not for criticism or judgement. Tell them if they post something and then have second thoughts, they can always edit it, delete it or replace it with something better. Those three dots at the upper right of each post or comment include "delete" and "edit."
In this excerpt from an unpublished novel, the dream is inspired by The Bhagavad Gita, but the dreamer is reading William Wordsworth in a book about the nature wisdom.
I have noticed the writing seems to come in waves and there is always a hiatus around puja time.
maybe the phases of the moon are affecting us collectively as our inspiration to write (and publish) comes and goes ... a few people I have spoken to are shy about putting their work up, I was myself at first.
Do you remember the time and date of your 'chance' encounter? It might be interesting to see where the planets were then.
...and about this site, I would credit Benoit de Bellefroid with the inspiration, and a "chance" encounter at the coffee bar in Cabella.
We now have 64 members. Click on MEMBERS at the top to see who they are. I would say about ten or twelve are active. If you, or anyone, can think of a way to keep the site active and vibrant, that would be great.
Inviting new members is one way.
Posing questions or challenges is another.
Yes! I was absorbed all the way through, engaged in your dream. Was there a particular poem which inspired you?
This is wonderful, Richard. Look forward to reading the full story. BTW, thanks for setting up this site. Great idea!