Childhood Memories From A Belfast Front Window
Drizzle, deceptive and subtle, soaks everything it touches, Seeps through crack and crevice, There’s a sense of permanence, this could last forever.
Sometimes there’s a soft rain.
Downpours bounce
Off cement and paving slab,
Splatter and splash back,
Kinetic, hypnotic, repetitious beauty
But no two patterns are the same.
Snowfalls, flurries, irregular ornamentations on the air, Swirl earthward, not far to fall now, Will it lie?
Ice, rare, Stalactites of frozen water dangle from cast iron lampposts, (Be careful, if go out you might slip and fall, say the old ones), Advice as water on a duck’s back. We kids make slides in the street Steel shods on hobnail boots Stooped or on our hunkers, GlIde in the ethereal light of the gas lamps.
I am delighted to rediscover your poem (which turned up again when i published something in the water theme) it is lovely the way it moves from a window view and gathers speed and energy -like the way you have launched yourself into life ... a mini biography
Love the sound and phrasing of the poem. Well done!
There is a short 1929 film Dutch film called RAIN ("Regen"). It is so simple and beautiful that it considered a landmark in documentary filmmaking. Have a look: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ADNWzg4ZmE
What a poem that describes the witness state of writer and poet. These are the things that we see. We have different eyes, yet, see the same frame of what others observe. We look deeper into the picture, and see beauty reign, and the infinity.