Poetry doesn’t have to follow any rules. It just has to be original, fresh.

look at e e cummings for example

then look around for inspiration

A man, how he wanders, believing to know

That would be a good title, and the subject of a hundred other poems.

Raghava,

I have never seen snow but can feel the chill here and then somehow even flowers are evoked and light and warmth. It is very evocative.

You might consider playing around with some lines to place obvious rhymes within rather that at the ends. (check out Shakespeare)

If you can find a way of saying 'believes' instead of 'believing' and 'becomes' instead of 'becoming'

you will give it more energy.

If you read it aloud a few times you will hear where the rhythm stumbles.

I recommend Stephen Fry's book "The Ode Less Travelled" subtitled "Unlocking The Poet Within"

And I look forward to more from you,

Lyndal